Here we go, difficult waves to beat the close out, one drop,in , but the break is so typically Curl Curl, no runners on the bank!
You make some good bottom turns but don’t step forward to add the speed of the turn onto the face, and then trying to make turns from the tail when there is no power in the wave to support you. A number of times you tried lean turns an failed ( that is the usual result.)
A step forward after a bottom turn is necessary as I said previously and long boarding is a set of movements back foot front weighting and moving well forward, note that much of the time when you are going across the face your nose is high , that technically is a stall and most of your motion is in stall ,hence the waves speeding past.
Back hand your foot position is stuck and static but your line speed is a little better as there is some front foot pressure
The wind strength changed markedly as the video progressed, you need to adjust your timing to work with that.
Don’t give yourself a hard time about the video, believe me we have all passed through that stage.
Only one real criticism, did you take note of your full drop in on the shortboard rider?
I will,watch the video,again
Jaffa

Having watched again, I think on a better day with better waves you will,get a chance to do better.
Please be aware of the surfers around you, you competed for sereral,waves with the shortboarder inside of you, think about the etiquette of surfing, long boarders have the reputation of being wave hogs, . If however he has backpaddled you and is out of turn then fair enough!