First understand, I am trying to honestly help you. You asked for a critic of your surfing photos. Sometimes the truth hurts and what i'm going to say will cut deep.
Your type of photos, I put in the "ALL" file. Not just bad hand or bad eyes or bad stance or bad positioning. But EVERYTHING. Top to Bottom Front to Back, I see many faults and bad habits.
So I will go down randomly:
1) Your front leading arm is cocked back and down across your chest. You can't open your chest and twist the torso into the wave, making you closed. Advice: point where you want to go
2) Stink Bug, Poo stance, "O" factor ( opposite of X-factor ) makes you stiff, limits your twist and you have to lean.
Advice: STAND UP !! Surf your height minus 1 inch.
3) Front foot at 9-10 o'clock. Could cause the Poo-stance or be the symptom of it. But again, it limits you twist. 9 o'clock makes for a overly strong Front side and a Weak back side ( *** but something is amiss, look to #8 **** ) Advice: point your toes more to 10-11 o'clock.
4) The first photo i thought you were on a Longboard. The last photo looks like you were on a Fish. Your positioning is all over the place. ( Maybe you meant to do that )
5) Side Eye. You'er looking from off line / outboard of the stringer. It causes the butt to go out to counter your head being past the rail. Advice: Stand Up !! Get your head over your butt.
6) Back hand is acting as a balance tool instead of for drive. It's either reaching for an invisible rail or countering your instability. Advice: On a backside turn, the back arm should come across the chest.
7) You're trying to hard. You are coiled up to tight. Advice: Relax
8 ) I noticed in photo #2 your front foot heel catching. But it seemed strange for you to catching a rail.
I figured it out after looking at photo #5. You are RAIL LOADING so super hard.
I'm not sure if it's by accident or someone told you to do that. Advice: you need to be more centered along the stringer.
There's more, but enough for now.