Pop up video critique

Hi surfers.
I was inspired from another thread to make a short pop up video. Since I'm no expert myself, I was hoping others could put in their 2 cents.
I wanted to do this because learning to take off correctly was immensely helpful in my own development. In fact, It took a long time for me to get my own pop up down, as I learned incorrectly from the get go.
I hope others avoid learning bad habits early, so I call on others to make sure I'm not passing on any of my own.
(Do we not enter the video string after = with Youtube tags to embed the video?)
I was inspired from another thread to make a short pop up video. Since I'm no expert myself, I was hoping others could put in their 2 cents.
I wanted to do this because learning to take off correctly was immensely helpful in my own development. In fact, It took a long time for me to get my own pop up down, as I learned incorrectly from the get go.
I hope others avoid learning bad habits early, so I call on others to make sure I'm not passing on any of my own.
(Do we not enter the video string after = with Youtube tags to embed the video?)