trying to get nice artsy pics first attempt

Well, I took out my dad's camera and decided to give a go at shooting a cool looking pic. The subject is random but i like it.
comments and mostly suggestions are really welcome. Remember this is my first picture.
I will get surfing pictures and have them ready after new year.
original image:
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2028/10250001yh0.jpg
photoshoped picture! i dont like the background.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/2011/quentin3bu0.jpg
comments and mostly suggestions are really welcome. Remember this is my first picture.
I will get surfing pictures and have them ready after new year.
original image:
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2028/10250001yh0.jpg
photoshoped picture! i dont like the background.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/2011/quentin3bu0.jpg