Surfing Waves

hi everyone hows it going ,my names dale and im from tynemouth in the uk pretty neat surfing spot for the uk . Im a musician with hopefully one day gianing myself a record deal, i wrote some songs and i thought id put em up to seewhat ppl think

tell me if you could chill on the beach to them haha thanks

www.youtube.com/daleparkermusic <<<<<< heres the link everyone Enjoy!!!

Not bad for only a year playing!!

An honest opinion from one musician to another.... I'm assuming you recorded the waves in the background on purpose? Or was that just background noise? Either way I think it took away from the song and made it sound like a bad recording... Also I'd like to hear the vocals a little better and more raw/natural sounding... Overall I liked the feel of the song though and think you did a pretty good job with it It just didn't grab me and pull me in... Just being honest with ya Keep at it and best of luck dude!

Dale,
really enjoyed that! thanks for posting a link to a nice piece of work. Good luck to you.
billie

your song breeze is really good man. i liked it, and the whole o o ooo o thing was catchy.

I would suggest the soundtrack used in the movie JUNO, Tree Hugger by Antsy Pants and Kimya Dawson. I find it relaxing that you'll enjoy the nearest shore in you and even your first dental check up ever since.