right arm is back which is showing " right"
left arm is "closed" and across the body when is should be starting to open up to the left.
right foot is okay at 3 o'clock
left foot is "closed" at 3 o'clock ( which is too powerful ). Should be more at 1 o'clock to give power to the back foot
right hand is holding on to an invisible wall. It makes the movement stiff
eyes is good looking to the turn apex
left arm is starting to open, but leading with the elbow ( palm is down )
right arm is still behind the center of the chest
* because the the left arm is closed and power is not given to the back foot , the left foot starts to roll on it's side *
left arm has moved to it's max position ( should be way more )
right arm has moved a bit more but not across the chest.
* notice the left shoulder is "showing" right *
now is the critical turn down moment
eye is still looking left, when it should have lead the movement and look right
right hand moves back from it's max position ( not enough swing rotation )
left fingers are trying to "steer" the board
things look good here from a single photo
bodyline from feet to head are inline with the stringer/board
eyes need to be more looking back to the curl
trail lines look good but maybe too deep for the speed/size of the wave
left arm cocks back at the elbow
right arm reaches for the wave at an awkward angle. Not really needed to be done.
it's like a motorcyclist trying to drag knee in a parking lot.
These are just observations. In time your actions will get smoother and more flowing. But the main problem is you're doing what I call "Whack a Mole ". You are trying to rip your arm thru the turn to force the action. You're going from the inside rail immediately to the outside rail too quickly. You have to flow from the left rail TO the flat bottom of your board THEN to the right rail. You're just chopping, which cuts your energy. It makes you catch a rail/edge and then your get flap jacked over. Stop trying to rip it and place your shots